Feedback of Music Video

As I have now began to edit together my footage I have filmed for my music video, I have decided to get some feedback from a small audience to see what they think. From this feedback many members of my audience said similar things, like the aspects of my lip syncing being too static and I could think of ways to change the way my video starts. I have now taken this into a count and have decided that I want to get more footage that I could use for the beginning of my video. The way I will do this is to get footage together of my male character to represent the lyrics 'he is sensible and so incredible and all my single friends are jealous'. I will also get footage of the couple together to use at the beginning of the video where this is no singing. However, I will still use some parts of the editing I have done as I think it works well.